Services

I’ll read your manuscript (up to

100,000 words) within 7-10 days and deliver a 700-1,000-word report assessing its strengths, weaknesses, and overall direction. Expect feedback on plot coherence, character arcs, world-building, and tone, tailored

to your vision for a speculative fiction audience. Perfect for early drafts or gauging if your story’s on track.

 

Deliverable:

PDF report. 

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$0.02 / word​​​​​​

I’ll dive deep into your world —whether it’s a sprawling galaxy or

a mythic realm — focusing on consistency, depth, and immersion.

I’ll refine cultural, historical, and political elements, untangle timelines, and brainstorm solutions for any gaps (like shaky lore or uneven tech). Ideal before writing or to polish an existing draft. Includes a detailed report and up to 5 pages of in-manuscript comments.

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Deliverable:
PDF report (1,500-2,000 words)

+ in-line notes.

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$0.03 / word
for manuscripts up to 50,000 words

Or an agreed number of online consultations ($60 each)

A 1-hour video call on your preferred platform (Zoom, Google Meet, etc.)

to discuss your project. Before editing, I’ll review your vision to align feedback with your goals. After editing, we’ll tackle questions about my notes

or brainstorm revisions. 

Standalone calls are available for specific challenges—like plotting, world-building, or if you need motivation, help with the demands

of being a writer.

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Deliverable:

1-hour video call, which

you can record.

$100 / hour
discount to $60 if bundled with another service

I’ll analyze your magic system or sci-fi technology, ensuring it’s consistent, impactful, and woven into your story’s plot and characters. Whether it’s hard magic, soft magic, or advanced tech, I’ll suggest tweaks to enhance stakes and clarity. Includes a report and targeted manuscript notes, perfect

for fantasy or sci-fi drafts needing

a technical edge.

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Deliverable:

PDF report (1,000-1,500 words)

+ in-line notes on up to 10 key scenes.

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$0.02 / word​​​

I’ll provide a comprehensive edit

of your manuscript, covering plot structure, pacing, character development, world-building, dialogue, and narrative flow. Expect detailed feedback to elevate your story, blending Eastern and Western storytelling techniques (like kishotenketsu) if desired. Includes

a lengthy report, extensive
in-manuscript comments, and a follow-up consultation to discuss revisions.

 

Deliverable:

PDF report (3,000-5,000 words), tracked changes/comments throughout the manuscript,

and a 1-hour video call.

$0.04 / word